Sunday, March 12, 2017

Dying Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I'm forever blind
And sunlight is unkind
Can't see black from white
Lost my precious sight
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Richard Wlodarski
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Mj Lemon 25 March 2017

This is a really great poem. And it's that last word- -cold. Depending on how it's interpreted, there are shades of meaning....Brilliant, Richard. A perfect 10.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 March 2017

M.J., you are so very kind with such positive feedback. And very insightful. I just knew that you would pick up on that last word. Good job, my friend!

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