Dwindling Faith Comments

This is a great poem, Asma.

Faith that rain will come, but it grows hard, powerful image.

It is certainly a vivid image, that just as certainly corresponds to the human mindscape, sometimes. Mine, anyway.

They need the heavens to open and pour down a thirst quenching elixir. They like us, live on hope. Lovely write. Love Ernestine XXX

I guess this poem works on two levels...am i right? The disparity between the title and the content is a kind of a hint that there is something more to this poem than it appears on the first reading. Reuben.