Wednesday, February 3, 2010

*dwells In Me Comments

Rating: 3.3

lost am I on a raging sea
drowning in a painful fury
of ruined dreams and collapsing me
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Catrina Heart
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ntil when the fire shall live? only my own self to extinguish when forgiveness dwells in me... that is how you evaluate the life with different angle. life is same but with variation in feelings..it was never a different.. full of anger, deception. happiness, joy and with all colors.....10

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Rafique Farooqi 20 May 2010

forgiveness dwells in us, and a divine character kind to others and ourselves....nice poem

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 24 February 2010

i read and marvelled at your atitude of repentence. marks 10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 February 2010

Cat, you always write in a touchy way that whenever I read your poem, I feel it's my idea. Have you theft all of my ideas that I became silent like an old tree besides a river?

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Ken E Hall 10 February 2010

Extremely deep in sorrow saved by forgiveness exellent work Catrina A strong character employed++++10 regards

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Lynda Robson 09 February 2010

A powerful write Catrina, you have a way with words, poignant 10 Lynda xx

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 06 February 2010

ma'am... i checked out your poetry section and i am surprised because you have new posts... i read it and i think this poem is one of your best.

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Kesav Easwaran 06 February 2010

very much poignant...something more than mere forgiveness seems to be dwelling in there...10

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Eyan Desir 05 February 2010

Catrina in back again! It good to see you are starting off where you left.. good job

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Kranthi Pothineni 04 February 2010

What dwells in us makes us strong and what comes out will make us weak.

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Ranjit Ravindran 03 February 2010

Nice theme... of the widening chasm betwween our dreams and reality. We build our life with bricks of compromise and mortar of sympathy. I wish all your dreams to come true.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 03 February 2010

until when the fire shall live....lovely deep last three lines...the helplessness we face makes us handless and faceless too...we feel tied and lost...very well expressed

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