lost am I on a raging sea
drowning in a painful fury
of ruined dreams and collapsing me
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forgiveness dwells in us, and a divine character kind to others and ourselves....nice poem
i read and marvelled at your atitude of repentence. marks 10
Cat, you always write in a touchy way that whenever I read your poem, I feel it's my idea. Have you theft all of my ideas that I became silent like an old tree besides a river?
Extremely deep in sorrow saved by forgiveness exellent work Catrina A strong character employed++++10 regards
A powerful write Catrina, you have a way with words, poignant 10 Lynda xx
ma'am... i checked out your poetry section and i am surprised because you have new posts... i read it and i think this poem is one of your best.
very much poignant...something more than mere forgiveness seems to be dwelling in there...10
Catrina in back again! It good to see you are starting off where you left.. good job
What dwells in us makes us strong and what comes out will make us weak.
Nice theme... of the widening chasm betwween our dreams and reality. We build our life with bricks of compromise and mortar of sympathy. I wish all your dreams to come true.
until when the fire shall live....lovely deep last three lines...the helplessness we face makes us handless and faceless too...we feel tied and lost...very well expressed
ntil when the fire shall live? only my own self to extinguish when forgiveness dwells in me... that is how you evaluate the life with different angle. life is same but with variation in feelings..it was never a different.. full of anger, deception. happiness, joy and with all colors.....10