Dwelling Comments

This is a spectacual poem. I cant write poems at all, the only one i wrote is -spirits in the sky- and it wasnt that good. All of you poems mean something and their awsome. keep it up

You really have a knack for conveying emotion in your poems. I really love the second stanza, especially.

this poem is beautifull... all the poems i have read of yours i love! ! ! is this girl in your poem aimed at any one? if she is and your writing about her it sounds like you have some thing VERY special... luv lisa xo :) lol also im your first comment for this poem! yay