Friday, October 10, 2008

Dutch Courage Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fragrant breeze was blowing,
And the wine was quickly flowing,
So my bravery was growing
By the min.
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Kevin Eaglesfield
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Original Unknown Girl 15 October 2008

I like this! The first two stanzas are especially witty... I love how each last line rhymes with the next one (sure there is some supremely poetic form for that which I don't profess to know!) Regardless of that it is a fun poem and one I enjoyed. HG: -) xx

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