Sunday, March 1, 2015

Dusty Gold Comments

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Give us this day our daily bread,
And free us from burden, too hard.
Dusty gold drew and destroyed men!
And made fool of much mighty men.
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Josey Alfred
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Madathil Rajendran Nair 01 March 2015

There is a common string of thought between this and your poem She Vanished which I read and commented upon yesterday. You can sing marvellously on human follies and foibles.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 March 2015

Grabbing world in one hand makes this entirely wonderful poem shared. Very nicely drafted poem shared really.

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Josey Alfred 18 March 2015

Yes. Sir, thank you very much. We are aware that greedy men make life miserable, and many innocent People are put to hardships,

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