Dusts Breath* Comments

i guess i won't need a drawbridge to cross this 'mote': mote mōt/ noun plural noun: motes a tiny piece of a substance. the tiniest mote of dust synonyms: speck, particle, grain, spot, fleck, atom, scintilla do you know how it feels to have not even a mote of hope? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i like it, especially these lines: Merrily dancing with the beam of breath.............................i'm a sucker for alliterations. bri :) :)