Wednesday, June 6, 2018

Dust To Dust Comments

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I was 18 when i first confided in a piece of paper and my pen was present to give testimony of what transpired
And there i was,
all alone seated on the edge of my bed with a note pad to take note of what i was going through
And with a leaking face
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Richard Phiri
Giving numb teacher
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Robert Murray Smith 06 June 2018

I like your informative narrative poem. However, you must read widely and comment on this site to progress. Do not use cliches in your poetry.

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Richard Phiri

Richard Phiri

Choma, Zambia
Richard Phiri
Richard Phiri
Choma, Zambia
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