Dust Comments

STONE BREAKS AT THE ENDS OF TIME. WITH A MIGHT BOOM TOGETHER I WILL BE WITH YOU AT LAST.....TO START ALL OVER AGAIN IN SANDS OF TIME AS SEED OF TEARDROPS OF LOVE IN YOUR EYES wow you are timeless... such beautiful poem..

What you have said in few lines is difficult to write in a whole book... I love your way with words... The empty space between planets Contains measurable amounts of dust Beautiful indeed... Regards, Kamran

Easy to understand and not to forget. Good piece of work

Simple words, but yet such a magnificent poem. So beautiful is all I can say.

i.e.u so beautiful and fantistic word!

A v e r y beautiful poem. 10 for it.

Loved how you made the word(Dust) able to be related to million things and million feelings

so organized thoughts nice

I love your poem.Iran is the global HQ of poetry.

Very thoughtful, reveal calmness of your heart.

The readers will have a hard time finding the connection between these lines. The rhymes abnd rhythm are fine and worthy. There must be a connection between them that the reader discerns immediately. Life is short. Do not force a reader to spend life time searching. You would not wish to either. Even minutes, is too long. GW62

Ashes to ashes, dust to dust, another lovely write from you, 10 Lynda xx

We were mold from the dust So we all go back to the dust Nice poem..10.

Melodious and fine poems, Nightingale... Gallant... 10... Tsira

A poem that speaks about the atoms of love...even those contained in the dust. I liked it a lot.

Ahh carried on this breeze strong enough to bend trees 'is your love' - that she sees! Great read Shiraz! *10* Friend Thad

yeah nice and dont forget-- thou art dust and unto dust thou shall return +++10 anjali

so beautiful! I like that one Take Care!

excellent! what an observation! ...........10++