Dust Comments

Awesome tribute to Dust The Golden Book of Life Rolls up perfect history Life's struggle and strife. CP

Very interesting and that dust covers everything.

I enjoyed this.Perhaps you could read my piece.'Time Past'.

very nice and imaginary poem. enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing.

This was such a joy to read, and filled with much imagery! ! Very nicely done and enjoyed this much....

Happiness is a choice that requires effort at times...nice flow and write

An ode to the sloughed off dead skin cell! Wonderful imagination Pablo. Yes it's the gentle room current or the vacuum cleaner! Mark

Well written my friend.

Fine writing my friend....! ! !

'...Because a wind that blows on all accounts Is better than a wind that sucks you away...' Nice placement for these ending lines to a terrific work. Very well written with such depicted imgaes. Nice.

success may breed on that little wind that blows today Because a wind that blows on all accounts.......................simply wonderful.introspective...............................well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

Great write with such a poignant ending 10++

an artfully penned theme...a beautiful metaphorical poem

Subliminal metaphoric tease highlites this sophisticated work....Philosophic prose/poetry is very interpretive, and can be somewhat abstruse.However, ...Your employment of stark symbolization, deflects this Reader obstacle, and affords the Reader a lucid read.Inveterating write...my friend, indeed! F j R 2009

Great theme.....you have a unique way of expressing things...very good..10

aye sir, fantastic poem. thank you for the read!

a theme so unique...very nicely artfully presented...the concluding words mean a lot more than what they read...good poem, Pablo...10