Dusk Comes Comments
Dusk comes, softly, slowly, like a shy bride
Dusk comes with a golden-red veil as if to hide
The diamonds in the hair, the khol in the eyes
Heat arises from the earth and flies
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Dusk falls and the day bows and says goodbye. ...........Nice one
Rani, this is an amazing composition...poetry at it's finest ....the opening line - Dusk comes, softly, slowly, like a shy bride Excellent *10*10* best wishes Jon
day bows and says good bye. what an amazing piece of writing, full of gentle images.10 for this. i am going to add it to my favourites. please read my after the sunset, on same lines
Dusk paints beauty here, elegant lines, pleasant composition...lovely poem.
Beautiful in language and structure. The imagery conveys the transformation from day tonight with all its magic and mystery.
Dusk comes, softly, slowly, like a shy bride Dusk comes with a golden-red veil as if to hide --------------- So beautiful - I cannot resist - so much has been said - I can see a Turner or Monet painting- Merci
A beautiful word painting of that magical interlude between light and darkness. You are a fine songsmith. Love, Sandra
My favourite time of the day Your personification of dusk as a shy bride is superb The second stanza conveys the every day ordinariness perfectly I applaud
A gem. Love especially dusk coming slowly like a shy bride in a gold-red veil. Concludes beautifully too. Fx
Dawn and dusk have always fascinated my mind…and this dusk of yours has beaten all of mine! Stanza 1 is a beautiful description of nature. Stanza 2 that of mundane life…And what is the link? the line ‘…and suddenly life doesn’t seem to be so bitter! ' A wonderful poem indeed! A ten for this dusk!
Nature handled with the sensativity of of a heart as warm as the setting sun itself we both share the same vision 10 Chris x
A beautiful picture of the evening painted here ….. giving a positive outlook in relation to life, metaphorically embellished by the language …… Abha
you have captued the mood of dusk so well.every line is beautiful. 15may08
A beautiful poem expressed in sensitive words! - Raj Nandy 15 May 08
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I truly enjoyed this majestic poem. It is wrought with imaginary and warmth.