Wednesday, December 20, 2006

Dusk Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wind whispers
A dulcet adieu to daylight.
The maya birds too
End their repertoire
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Jann Matthew Papin
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Geovanni Leaño 21 February 2008

it's simple yet beautiful! nice poem from a poet as young as you! keep it up!

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Kelly Allen Vinal 20 December 2006

Excellent painting with words - very vivid!

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Francesca Johnson 20 December 2006

Great imagery - I can see that crimson sky - and a happy feeling left after reading this. Well-penned from someone so young. Well done, Jann. Love, Fran xx

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Jann Matthew Papin

Jann Matthew Papin

Davao City, Philippines
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