Duplicity, Yet To Come Comments

Shyness leads my eyes to express What lays hidden in my breast Humming birds wings, morning song awaken him'- - - - - - - - Silence speaks in such loving way.

Rachel Ann Quite readable and a strong emotion well expressed. I give you an 8 of 10

my eyes disclose my passion, Shyness leads my eyes to express what lays hidden in my breast. Beautiful poem.. last lines reveal a lot.. thank you.

Shyness leads my eyes to express what lays hidden in my breast. “Hummingbirds wings, morning song, awakens him” - Beautiful, exquisite. all the hidden emotions and feelings expressed in a wonderful way to the edge of eros. thank you very much

Beautiful- - silence speaks.No words required.Thanks for this stunning write.

For the moment this is my favorite but I have only read a few so far.

My favorite piece so far. Thank you for your gift.

eyes talk.....very nicely expressed

This was a very beautiful poem. I would very much like to read more.

When eyes say more than words. Excellent RAB, Paul.