Dungeon Comments

wow amazing poem.. very well written :)

I liked how the words came to light...10s

that was cool i liked the whole oily chains part males the room have a feel literally to it and it help bring it to life.. lets see here. describing the bench was a good idea cuz it lets me know that this place is very old and this body has been here for a while and the bench was there even longer gives the title a bit of a connection u used in the distance twice so i gave u a nine out of ten put a new word like in the far gloom or something and it will be a ten

Very imaginative. Nice work. 10

im kinda freaked, its a very good poem

ou scared me, just a bit. this means it is doing hat it was written for.. nice.

Great poem! Very good imagery!