Sunday, October 22, 2006

Dungbeetles Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dungbeetle sat on a mountain of dung
Dungbeetle shat from the ladder's top rung.
Dungbeetle fell after slipping a bit
Dungbeetle drowned in a pile of pure shit.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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M S 24 October 2006

I think it's a contender to be the next Itsy Bitsy Spider. Loved it!

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Allan James Saywell 22 October 2006

I love this poem Herbert it reminds me of someone who gives me a hard time AJS

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