Thursday, January 1, 2015

Dunes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dunes
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Ah, what is life!
Made of nothing finer than
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Geetha Jayakumar 07 January 2015

Beautiful description on life. Very true said, , , , , Grains of sand we are.. Loved it.

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Salini Nair 05 January 2015

beautiful.....nicely presented the poem......great work

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Rajesh Thankappan 02 January 2015

An excellent poem reflecting the universal truth of life. The body shall one day crumble with the wind of time and nothing shall remain. 10/10

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Valsa George 02 January 2015

As sand dunes succumb to the might of winds, our earthly existence is shattered by antagonistic forces! For this highly philosophical poem, written in style, I give you top marks!

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