Dunes Comments

ahhh.. wonderful sensory piece. I can almost smell that sea air and feel the cool breeze! -chuck

Thie reminde me when we were kids... playing in dunes and making hideouts... Great work D... R.

It's hard to find such a place of sanctuary in the modern world. The sense of escaping is very strong in this Dee, and it's a very appealing notion. Great idea very well expressed - stripped down to the essentials, both poem and theme! The best to you, jim xx

I love the safe haven idea. It was a great poem Dee: -)

Gorgeous Dee - I love the idea of your skin being 'awake'. Hugs Anna xxx

And it goes so well with a couple of Adult beverages....LOL

Warm and cosy Very rosy I like your etchings Do like mine?

This is beautiful Dee.........love it! Hugs, Diane

Dee, Such a beautiful thought, a feeling, to hold each other close, perchance ... but, when that sand gets in your underpants, you can forget about romance! B.V.A.

Yeah, it's a very tactile poem isn't it? That feeling is unmistakeable. I'm imagining a fairly overcast but dry day for some reason. Am I close? Ez

brings back menories of younger days the dunes that hid us from the gaze of others on the beach. Love your poem it`s a peach. love archie

This is pageantly beautiful work, my dear...The imagery is radiant & full of verve... Can almost feel that last grain of sand in the heel of my beach sandal........lol! FjR