Wednesday, November 9, 2005

Dune Snake Comments

Rating: 5.0

She is a like cinnamon-scented dune beneath me.
Moonlight caresses her with mysterious shadows that
hold euphoric promise... her warm scent
creating nocturnal desires.
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C. Michael Miller
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Malgorzata Mika 12 September 2007

Wahnt a vivid, fluently-written describtion of a woman! The use of imaginary and soothing similies is the core of this poem. They create a charming atmosphere of peace, beauty and desire that hide a dormant element that is about to burts...

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Charles Chaim Wax 09 November 2005

a rich compelling vivid use of words right there in the scent of her soul a really fine poem

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C. Michael Miller

C. Michael Miller

Oak Harbor, WA
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