green betides by days and nights
chilled snow melts away
by touch of rays golden
as warmth holds on by embrace
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I must recognize the beauty of your metaphores, enmeshed within a word for the soul and a word for the pilgrim. True beauty lies beyond all physical boundaries of men, but within the essence of Mother Nature. Truly beautiful indeed!
As you wished i checked out your poem x) .... it's really so beautiful really captures the dawn in words i will certainly add this to my favorites
why don't you invite me to read your new poems you know i like your poems please tell me when you write a new poem.....wonderful as usual....10
very captivating...words enough to amaze us... as always really describes a beautiful and so meaningful picturing your words very vividly...very impressive DULCET DAWN...a very captivating title.. describing a dawn with a picture so pleasant and soothing.. very refreshing...from darkness to dulcet dawn...inspiring as always, I love this... 10+++ Maia lovelots,
Hey beautiful expressions indeed.. you capture the reader's heart by first line and keep him entranced till the very end.. great refreshment indeed.. nice 10++ lovess shan
The juncture of disapperance of night and visibility of sun is beautifully described. The poem rejoices the heart of a reader because the frigidity of snow has gone away, darkness fades and the ocean has regained its momentum.Subhendu, where do you get so many good words from-appropriate for the occasion? Excellent write.
wow this is really nice=] n im hopein to read more from u cuz this is some good stuff u got goin on here n all ur other ones i read..lol i read like almost 20 of them i was so into ur poems -celina
This is very interesting and very good poem. I like it.(10v) . Thank you.Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt
To describe your own 'dulcet dawn' dear friend is so enlightening for those of us who live afar - - and thank you for the gentle warm words which certainly deserve a full 10 - - - greetings from Fay.
Stupendous poetry! ! ! well worded and formed...I am in awe in your crafts...10+++
Many dawns but poetry still goes on every time with new luminosity, new imagery.Beautiful poem, Dr. Kar.........10/10.
A beautiful piece Dr. Kar announcing the break of dawn with brilliant imagery...10
Picturesque work bringing in a new dawn - 'earth seems sates up by fill of sun'. An inspirational and beautiful poem. 10 Karin Anderson
Nice flowing rhythm. Good descriptions, but I had trouble following the last two stanzas, they did not seem as well constructed as the first two verses.