Thursday, August 6, 2009

Dulcet Dawn Comments

Rating: 4.8

green betides by days and nights
chilled snow melts away
by touch of rays golden
as warmth holds on by embrace
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Dr subhendu kar
COMMENTS
Mimi Brown 23 August 2009

Nice flowing rhythm. Good descriptions, but I had trouble following the last two stanzas, they did not seem as well constructed as the first two verses.

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Matthew C. L. Pratt 23 August 2009

It's a very diverse descriptive poem

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Dragon Wizard 22 August 2009

I must recognize the beauty of your metaphores, enmeshed within a word for the soul and a word for the pilgrim. True beauty lies beyond all physical boundaries of men, but within the essence of Mother Nature. Truly beautiful indeed!

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Mystic C 22 August 2009

As you wished i checked out your poem x) .... it's really so beautiful really captures the dawn in words i will certainly add this to my favorites

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Omar Ibrahim 19 August 2009

why don't you invite me to read your new poems you know i like your poems please tell me when you write a new poem.....wonderful as usual....10

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Miriam Maia Padua 15 August 2009

very captivating...words enough to amaze us... as always really describes a beautiful and so meaningful picturing your words very vividly...very impressive DULCET DAWN...a very captivating title.. describing a dawn with a picture so pleasant and soothing.. very refreshing...from darkness to dulcet dawn...inspiring as always, I love this... 10+++ Maia lovelots,

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Shashendra Amalshan 15 August 2009

Hey beautiful expressions indeed.. you capture the reader's heart by first line and keep him entranced till the very end.. great refreshment indeed.. nice 10++ lovess shan

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 15 August 2009

The juncture of disapperance of night and visibility of sun is beautifully described. The poem rejoices the heart of a reader because the frigidity of snow has gone away, darkness fades and the ocean has regained its momentum.Subhendu, where do you get so many good words from-appropriate for the occasion? Excellent write.

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Carol Gall 14 August 2009

an excellent write chilled snow melts 10

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Celina Zavala 11 August 2009

wow this is really nice=] n im hopein to read more from u cuz this is some good stuff u got goin on here n all ur other ones i read..lol i read like almost 20 of them i was so into ur poems -celina

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Marcella D 11 August 2009

this poem is singing and I can understand every word

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Michelle Kafka 10 August 2009

Wonderful imagery in this poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Maria Barbara Korynt 10 August 2009

This is very interesting and very good poem. I like it.(10v) . Thank you.Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt

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Fay Slimm 10 August 2009

To describe your own 'dulcet dawn' dear friend is so enlightening for those of us who live afar - - and thank you for the gentle warm words which certainly deserve a full 10 - - - greetings from Fay.

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Catrina Heart 10 August 2009

Stupendous poetry! ! ! well worded and formed...I am in awe in your crafts...10+++

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 August 2009

Many dawns but poetry still goes on every time with new luminosity, new imagery.Beautiful poem, Dr. Kar.........10/10.

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Sandra Martyres 09 August 2009

A beautiful piece Dr. Kar announcing the break of dawn with brilliant imagery...10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 August 2009

powerful wording! a fine emblemetic expressions! 10+

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Picturesque work bringing in a new dawn - 'earth seems sates up by fill of sun'. An inspirational and beautiful poem. 10 Karin Anderson

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Roman Petrov 09 August 2009

cool poem I like it! 10 votes!

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