He looked about fifteen,
leaving slovenly against the
wall of the local post office;
Eyes showing the animation
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And would you believe it, this man's destined to become our Prime MInister one day... The mind boggles. Great descriptive piece written with flare. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Yep! Someone had to say it.... but would not have done as eruditely as you. t x
Doesn't speak well for the rest of Americans, but you see alot of these kind everywhere nowadays. A product of the 'meth' generation, perhaps? You describe him perfectly, right down to the attitude. Well done, Jer! Linda
FANTASTIC! A sign o' the times poem dealing with the 'yoots' of America. I love what you brought to this poem, Jerry. You bring a very nice young, fresh vibe to poetry, and we can use it! :) Thanks for sharing! xoxoxo Ashley
Yeah, great imagery and funny ending, too.: -)