Friday, July 5, 2019

Duet Sung Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

I found my love walking a one-way street.
Imagine how confusing ‘tis to find
Not knowing love's will— felt out of my wit,
It was chaotic but of cuter kind.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 July 2019

But to my luck, same frustration she felt, And love for long frozen, began to melt........brilliant conceptualization. Beautiful poem on love and romance is justifiedly delineated. Thanks for sharing.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 July 2019

Thank you so much Kumarmaniji, I appreciate your feedback.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 July 2019

I found my love walking a one-way street....wonderful imagination! In some part of the poem you say, 'It was chaotic but of cuter kind'....tender romantic poem sir! An endearing poem......10

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 July 2019

You seem to like sonnets, Dr Swain, thanks for the feedback.

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