Saturday, September 3, 2005

Duel Comments

Rating: 3.5

Like cowboys we stood
Hands on our hips
Holsters at the ready
Blood on stretched, dry lips
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David Gerardino 05 September 2005

AMANDA, THIS IS THE BEST SO FARE....YOU CAN SEE THE PICTURES IN YOUR WORDS.....

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Tears In Rain 04 September 2005

Love the lead to the head bit. I truly does stumble, fumble in the last few lines. Intentional?

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