Tuesday, October 14, 2008

Duck Pond Comments

Rating: 4.8

I just got relaxed when she tugged at my sleeve.
'Mamma, mamma, when can we leave? '
With hopeful eyes that seemed to shout,
'Mamma, mamma, when can we go out? '
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Stephanie Dower
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Jim Hogg 19 April 2009

You paint a picture of a simpler and happier world in this - that of childhood... it's wonderful while it lasts.. and er don't forget that bread next time.... jim

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Pensive Phoenix 16 March 2009

Nice poem with a good ending.

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Stephanie Saba 17 October 2008

I love this poem! It's adorable! ! ! ! 10+

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Ency Bearis 14 October 2008

a monologue, nicely narrated...great write...A10 Ency Bearis

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Philip Kirkland 14 October 2008

Awwww! That's cute! ...

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