*** Dubai Debacle **** Comments

your satire is so subtle...it does not make fun of anyone...it makes one to pause and think.....the flavor is fresh like the Sheikh Shake.good work Nikunj...just keep writing.

Your grace in presentation of a visit to the dentist and reflections with imaginative ease is conspicuous. Thanks. janani

Subtle sarcasm works well here. Nicely thought out, flows smoothly. Well done!

nation and the rulers everywhere cheat the common man..to such levels...nothing can happen overnight

this was great, i absolutely loved the imagery and the fact that i could cleary picture a scene in my mind. awesome job :)

Well thought through and amusing too - - you have captured the feel of the event with gory reality - - - well done 10 Fay

Very descriptive. I liked it!

Very creativity poem. Great imagination is mixed here. Well penned Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

Comment from LADY GRACE: this piece is different from normal topics...so i will say, this is another good entry...so, what happened to the canine... premolars and the hemorrhage syndrome? ...well, i like this in the way it is represented, , , from sheik shake.....and from sands in the desert where cacti are there..my goshhhhhhhhhhhhh...actually, so nice the presentation of course...aside from educational, it also introduces new terminologies for everyone..nice idea and nice poem...as i had promised, as the sun rises in east, i'll be in your page my sweety...so its 6am here and the sun starts to shine in the mountains of the promise land, mindanao...smileeeeeeeeeeeeeee please put that in my commnts...i cant open ur commnt page..my goshhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, , i dont know..i send it many times but it is not allowed, , , so i have no patient to wait..my goshhhhhhhh, i have to go so i'll leave these wrds for ur commnt.please do the favor to write this in your 'dubai debacle''..thanks for inviting...

allegorical write on the issue...imaginative piece...very well composed...10

This piece is interesting one cannot but love to read it the more. Keep it up.

Very clever poem Nikunj, well done.

'Now senses shall spring where cement once stayed. Back home the juice corner introduced a new flavor, sheikh shake. ' Great write Nikunj.....with Sheikhs shaking and cactii reflecting in the glass buildings that have replaced the sandy desert tracks...very imaginative indeed..

Imagination mixed with your creativity is a very interesting combination! Entertaining and fun to read! Makes one really think. DC

Your imagination knows no bounds Nikunj and you have come up with such an original idea and sheik shake is so brilliant. Great writing! 10 love Karin

sheik shake - that is one for the record books.

Too good, too inteligent...man, i find evrything great in your arena.

Yes quite interesting, well written poem, were you working there, quite a bringdown for Dubai, many companies getting a Sheik Shake. You have written a lot I will read themover time.

good write nothing is for sure as they found out its kind of sad 10

Ingenious labels for Dubai Debacle. CP