Tuesday, July 28, 2020

Duas Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moon and stars are laid at my feet.
This is by all accounts
The impact of the duâs of the elders.
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 December 2022

One can't prosper sans blessings of elders but... Your short poem carries a precious message...Appreciated.

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Anjandev Roy 29 July 2020

Wonderful...............anjandev roy.

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Kostas Lagos 29 July 2020

Amazing.Simple, laconic, wonderful

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M Asim Nehal 29 July 2020

Beshak, Prayers are umbrella, prayers are shields and what not and to earn them from elders is no joke. Wonderful poem in a new format. enjoyed it.

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Rajnish Manga 29 July 2020

Very noble and sublime sentiments. It is the blessings of elders that make these things possible, Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 July 2020

Moonlight and the stars! ! ! Life with natural laws. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 July 2020

Blessings of elders Can change roots of every life If there's modesty

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Varsha M 28 July 2020

Aarzoo puri hui Aarzoo ki Duwao ke dam pe Aai galib yaad rakna Keemti Nazrana taufa diye hai Sambhale rakhna dilo zaan se Yehi aarz kiya hai. Beautiful Aarzoo.

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Sharad Bhatia 28 July 2020

और दुआ कबूल हुई चांद, सितारों से आपकी मुलाकात जो हुई।। Very Beautiful person and heart touching poem about " Duas" Ratef10+++

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