Duality & Unity Comments

I love the sense of harmony emerging out of opposites that your poem conveys. Very expressive. Julia

water water everywhere! ...so eloquent and arresting...i adore this...regards linda...btw...i half expected lizzie and darcy from the title...lol

The sense of unity in this is superb Hugh. A first reading made me ask myself whether it would have been best to have done away with writing it in stanzas and have it as one piece, but I think that the dialectic that you express: that unity can only be achieved through the seperation of parts, is brilliant. I gave this a lot of thought before commenting because I think it is your most profoundly philosophical piece.