Friday, June 1, 2007

Duality Comments

Rating: 4.9

i wrote this poem years ago when i was in middle of understanding
if my thoughts were as what was going in life....

Nothing seems to be quiescent,
...
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 16 July 2007

Sangeeta.. You are always searching your inner self...

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R. S. Farris 22 June 2007

this one is interestingly abstract. i had to read it twice. can definitely relate.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 22 June 2007

This 'internal' journey of emotions is well done. I like this a lot. L

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Melvina Germain 13 June 2007

I enjoyed the read, I like the complexity of this piece, in some places a little abstract. You bring the reader into the poem and make them sit and ponder. Excellent work Sangeetak, I like very much.--Melvina--

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Edna Javelosa 10 June 2007

nice piece..life goes on..

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