Friday, November 11, 2011

Duality Comments

Rating: 5.0

Trending fashion of superficial beauty
seeps into the souls of those caught
in tides of complicated insanity;
dancing in what life it has brought.
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Chinedu Dike 08 February 2017

Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. Lovely poem elegantly brought forth in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Mark.

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Matthew C. L. Pratt 12 January 2012

Really excellently crafted, and about something that really matters as well.

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Dave Walker 11 November 2011

Good poem, liked it. A good write. May i invite you to read my poem called, Streats of salvation.

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