Monday, June 9, 2008

Dual Hearts Comments

Rating: 5.0

to live with two hearts
set against each other
akin to hatred within love
is my fate, born
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Mary Taylor
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Maxim Muyu 15 November 2019

Very nice write, I really like it.10+

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 April 2019

to matriculate myself to the art of life. No, I think you have graduated successfully, a lovely little poem.

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Smile Henry 09 November 2009

The two natures, have we not all lived. Great poem!

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Florence P. Wordsmith 09 February 2009

Great poem. It obviously comes from a place that is real.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 09 June 2008

Intersting duality within a poem nicely composed

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