Tuesday, March 17, 2009

*dual Clutches Comments

Rating: 3.1

The woven fabric in rectangular counts
The tip of needle the tapestry in calligraphy
To write the way as sung by maestros
Written in gold stitched in silk
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Barry A. Lanier 24 March 2009

' I have conquered the world ' and now it is not of me', , , , when challenged I read my poem 'FISHIN'.....

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Barry A. Lanier 24 March 2009

You definitely saved the power and impact of the poem for the last Metrical stanza........'even not an illusion to begin the fancy' 'the dual clutches'......thats good stuff.....................

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Malini Kadir 23 March 2009

I loved the last two lines very much... the flow of thoughts... the quest of mind... the just God I also find What a booty in dual clutches.... Man in his fear to let go..... thank you for sharing.....

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Reshma Ramesh 23 March 2009

sadiq...sometimes i wonder....how can someone write like this..........................

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Karla Bardanza 18 March 2009

Fantastic lines! Incredible stanzas... Karla Bardanza

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