Dry Scorched Land Awaits Monsoon Rains Comments

We will meet in many poetic expressions Varsha, as Paul and I also met, in the love of the lines, where like the moth to light, the bee to honey, poets must meet in a shared love of poetry.

I always like your poetic expressions. They are really good. sea breezes sweep in pain lash lands.......wow Indeed pain lash land is really painful. season sliver pain comes in monsoon rains...... metaphorical beauty awesome. Thankyou

a beautifully flowing poem enjoyed the rhythm and flow rains come in on ocean breezes Well expressed