Friday, September 14, 2007

Dry Cry Comments

Rating: 3.9

I've held back years of painful tears;
Tears that must be wept.
lest they seap like poison into my heart,
lest they leak out of me like blood.
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Frank James Ryan, Jr. 20 November 2008

Very powerful work. You share your passion, and sorrow with graceful expression. Great write! Lauren Marie Elizabeth

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 November 2008

Commendable Work...structurally mellifluous...Much potential in your efforts...Keep That Pen Pumping! FjR //\\

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Emily Oldham 01 November 2008

wow....... i can't find the words to define this poem.............. just wow.............. keep writing

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DEAD PLEASURES 27 October 2008

'lest they seap like poison into my heart' Great stuff <3 D.P

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