Thursday, October 1, 2009

Drunks Denial Comments

Rating: 5.0

the drunk will continue on the path of denial
and accepting the truth is not their style.
they can sit at a table and drink a fifth of gin
and for them, it is no sin.
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COMMENTS
Kranthi Pothineni 06 October 2009

Packed with a message which unfortunately will be denied by the drunks(that's what your title says too) . Well composed.

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Matt Mooney 04 October 2009

Very real. Destroying oneself by drinking to excess is bad enough but to destroy others as well is simply murderous.10.

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lovely.. truly lovely... not the drunks but the poetry... being drunk is also a sin.. a lil is ok.

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Christine Kerr 03 October 2009

Love the rythem in this one. A girl at work talks about her drinking nights as if like watching a good show. I really can't get the thrill of it all. Why can't they see that no one else is as hip about their drunken state as they are. Such a sad place to be. Great poem in explaining it all, very well said indeed.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 03 October 2009

it is not a game to be played on the road...very well said...10

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