Drunken Senses... Comments

Now you must have been pretty drunk to fly on an ant! ! Great imagination and a twist at the finish. Well done. Karin

Riding on an ant...original, Vaibhav!

great effort to express feelings

Heh! ! Carl can be very harsh at times... But I feel this is a very imaginative piece Vaibav.. True it is kinda short, but very nice imagery... A different poem. cheers Shan

Well, this poem was disappointing, Vaibhav, for after the fine three lines, the fourth and concluding line was disappointing and I felt there should have been more to this brief poem. A poet of your impressive ability should have been able to carry the ideas you expressed a bit further and to a more satisfying conclusion. Carl.

Brilliant. If you can find that ant send it my way, I would like to go for a ride, too. A few words say much. Concise, vivid, imaginative and enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing.10+

A surrealistic picture.........deep and profound. A poet's domain of imagination and imagery..............If u find some time please read one of my earlier work...Dream....

Great piece of work Vaibhav - your use of imagery is impressive...the black water and the ant -10

fantastic, as always, my friend! loved the poem. thank you.

i have never been drunk, but i get what you said.. from stories told to me.. it is the same.

a matured vision. shan

the reality and the illusion...good symbolic write...the black water and the ant are the symbols you use well there...thanks...10

'and frightened the ant i flew on'...just in four lines you come out with lovely imagery...reality getting merged with illusion..almost like a dream..senses are always drunk either with joy or despair..the black water here colors the poem...despair..lovely