Monday, June 29, 2009

Drunken Mistakes Comments

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Friday night soon, what can I say?
I hope he comes, and want's to stay,
Going to get drunk, pass out on the floor,
Give him what he wants, he'll be begging for more,
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Autum Foster
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Christine Schmidt 11 October 2009

There's a key word in your poem and it's in the title: MISTAKE Def a mistake to partake in intimate activity while drinking, it leads to trouble and life long pain. I do remember though my younger teenage years-some truth and I'm sure other teens can relate.

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