Tuesday, July 15, 2008

Drunken Dad Comments

Rating: 5.0

My dad loved public houses
Mum would scream and shout
She used to hide his trousers
To stop him going out
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VICTORIA GEORGE
Dad
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Jun Insigne 25 July 2008

My trousers snugly on his hips But swinging round his knees, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , I like this line, , , , , great poem, , , Good writing.........................thanks a lot.10/10

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