Your fluid gazes, like the ebb and flow of desire:
You are bathing my body in your oceanic eyes…
Touching and caressing, holding it with your thoughts:
I feel naked, and vulnerable as a timid virgin;
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This poem goes straight to my favourite poems. You left speechless, title of this poem takes it to a different level altogether. Beyond ratings.....
this is beautiful exotic and fully of camouflaged anxiety when one is in love
Nectar of love flows with beauty of perception of life. You have mastered in presenting lovable words in this brilliant poem. Love allows all to rise and quench thirst. An amazing sharing is done here really.10
Like candle-wax in reflection and tenderness........ fascinating use of simile! A lovely poem!
Awesome... For your love. I inhale the odour of your being From your hair whirling in the wind, and I melt Like candle-wax in affection and tenderness...