Drunk By My Self. Comments

I KNOW THAT PAIN! ! ! ! !

I like it. sounds great in my mind and paints a dark tell, thanks 10

Dark. I like a dark poem. The emotions through your head at the time must have been extreme. Keep that in mind when you write more. Love it.

Wow this was dark.... really deep..

Dark and drunk, nice job.

Morbid... but good! ! !

Your very talented and very deep... wonderful poem! great write and keep it up! give it a 10!

you got skills I'll give you that Is a good write I agree with Greenwolfe 1962 It has a moral

one of the best you've written! i loved it! a tear jerker and a wonderful story of this man trying to find the light. to bad he died but it taught me a lesson! ! i loved this! the whole thing flowed very well, i would check the rhythm in the 4 line.. as i begin to feel drunk.... maybe you could change the way it flows to fit in the line above it better. but other then that it was wonderful.

this is good work i loved it, and know how you feel, so good job.

Thats heavy dude...good job

very good. those of us that can relate thank you for your poem and your boldness of putting it on the internet. thank you

Its really a very good poem.

a very touching and heartfelt poem. almost anyone can relate to this poem, going back to a time where they felt dead inside bringing it to the outside by engaging in risky behaviors.on the other side of the spectrum this poem represents the theory that there is a light at the end of the tunnel when there is someone who is there to save you.

that was sad..i guess the alcohol brought that end...but being a drinker and smoker myself i have never come to such decisions in their company...even rich people face aproblem..ther is a unfulfiled space whichif not driven by us will be driven by fear..10

Bad times creates inner strength. I believe you posses that strength. Thx.

this is a great poem. i love the story and the way its written =] xx

Wow, Hard one. Enough people are killed not by their will.