Saturday, December 15, 2007

Drunk And Alone On A Saturday Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

drunk and alone on a saturday night
a few glasses of wine is all it takes
its feels so good to ease the pain
he's thousands of miles away
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shannon wright
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Nicely written and it captures a lot of truth.

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Me Myself And I... 17 January 2008

easier to drive him away now than have him reject me later Powerful, well written lines

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Kitti Manson 07 January 2008

'and he holds not just the key to my heart but the beating beast itself' - Favorite line, you are a good writer. Keep it up.

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shannon wright

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