Tuesday, November 29, 2005

Drunk Comments

Rating: ★3.5

Most people get drunk
when they feel like they have sunk.
most try to go back but they might not react
as fast as they should
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Jordan Antrim
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Declan McHenry 29 November 2005

This is deep. I like it. A couple of minor spelling errors but the construction is sound. I like that line 'They remove the cap, and never look back, on their severed fate. Eventually they live their life in a crate.' Very evocative. Excellent.

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Jordan Antrim

Jordan Antrim

Oklahoma
Jordan Antrim
Jordan Antrim
Oklahoma
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