Monday, September 8, 2014

Drum Of Freedom Comments

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Freedom, freedom they shout,
freedom, freedom they say.___
Obsessed with freedom!
Freedom, freedom night and day.___
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Md. Asadullah
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Josey Alfred 30 March 2015

So long men remain selfish, and want to enjoy the fruit of others sweat a toil, freedom will remain an illusion. No body is really free. But what you have vividly painted is truly, a miserable existence. killing, torture, rape are fine, just shout freedom, freedom- - -is but the thieves are on board, and God help the victims. we only can pray and wish them success.

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Heather Wilkins 24 October 2014

they beat the drums of freedom let it happen all over the world

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Darlene Walsh 21 September 2014

Again, words of wisdom. I never heard of dacoity before, it is good to learn new words, but it would be better for the world and freedom if such words were not needed. Darla :)

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Chinedu Dike 20 September 2014

An insightful, well articulated, and nicely penned poem written with intensity to drive home the point. Lovely. Thanks for sharing.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 10 September 2014

Let our our winged thought may fly freely..let the speech freedom may come true...let we eradicate poverty...freedom...a dream of animal instinct

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Soulful Heart 09 September 2014

freedom from these bonded labours of money and its vices......yes a true fact......the lines of truth snd lies had blurred to nothingness due to these freedom exploitors.....

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Somanathan Iyer 08 September 2014

Nice poem! let us hope your aspirations come true!

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