Sunday, February 26, 2012

Drugs War And Hate Comments

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Do I see
What nobody else can see
Is it just me
or is the world going down
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Dave Alan Walker
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Jim Cobain 03 March 2012

Good poem. I like it.. thanks for your comment.. appreciated.

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Kevin Patrick 02 March 2012

My mom suffered a lot as a child, this reminds of something that she told me. A splendid work, from a fantastic writer

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 29 February 2012

Short and concise; this poem is marvelous with a super-positive ending: I want my child to see love, happiness and peace.

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Ramesh Rai 29 February 2012

Amazing. I liked it, great thought

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Michael Lampp 27 February 2012

I love it. You are an amazing poet. One of my favs

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 27 February 2012

The hallucinating drugs are fashionable nowadays and the children get hooked to it easily, as the authorities are too democratic...

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Danny Draper 27 February 2012

Amen to that brother. Great thoughts, nicely crafted.

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Ronald Kerst 26 February 2012

I know where you are coming from there...We don't want our children to see this but as sad as it is..we are living in troubled times. Good write!

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Eric Cockrell 26 February 2012

we either make a future for our children today, or they will have none!

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Rajendran Muthiah 26 February 2012

you want the children to inherit a peaceful abode from their parents.A god-given heart is yours!

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Rajendran Muthiah 26 February 2012

you want the children to inherit a peaceful abode from their parents.A god-given heart is yours!

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Rajendran Muthiah 26 February 2012

The poet's heart is lovely!

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Rajendran Muthiah 26 February 2012

you want the children to inherit a peaceful abode from their parents.A god-given heart is yours!

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Rajendran Muthiah 26 February 2012

As a loving father, you want to bequeath to your children, a world without wars, drugs and other evils which scare the people all over the world. God has given you a good heart. Cheers!

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Valerie Dohren 26 February 2012

Something we all wish for Dave - a lovely poem.

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

Pudsey, Leeds
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