Saturday, October 22, 2011

Drugs And The Cheats Comments

Rating: 4.5

I put my head
In these hands
of despair as I see
The drugs and the cheats
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Dave Alan Walker
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Geetha Jayakumar 16 September 2013

Poem with a Great message.. Loved the way you portrayed it.

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Anthany Rohloff 25 August 2012

Great read! ! Thanks for the suggestion! ! I'll be reading more of your poems! ! Keep up the great work!

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Bethany Buhl 04 November 2011

I hate to say this but I highly doubt people are gonna take that big of a stand against drug dealers.

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Sonali Sings 30 October 2011

Again another poem taking into account another big evil prevailing in the social order that is drug trafficking. And the remedy lies in, 'Maybe it's time They took their own brown Then lets see If they can stand their ground One way or another They are leaving this town ' Great write.

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Richard McClellan 29 October 2011

Love this line here Dave! ! ! 'Whats it going to take For someone to bring them down' Great Peom!

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Stefanie Fontker 25 October 2011

The corrupt of the world. I cannot find it in me to blame them, this is an ugly world. Beautiful poetry.

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Rachel Butler 25 October 2011

'Whats it going to take For someone to bring them down' RAB

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Kaleena Riddell 24 October 2011

This is good, and a good example on how drugs and drugs dealers are affecting our life more and more these days.

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Lady Keva 24 October 2011

Great poem I love it. Its acreality check 4 drug dealers and cheaters...... oh and Im glad u liked my poem

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K .w 24 October 2011

This poem is so true. People shouldn't make money that way it's called being lazy. They should get real jobs!

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Jacqui Broad 23 October 2011

People get addicted, I think, to escape reality. The drug pushers abuse that weakness. As long as there are addicts, there'll be sellers. What is 'brown'? It's even more sad, when you have someone in the family who's an addict. Great poem as always... :)

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Unwritten Soul 23 October 2011

Sometimes i feel bad for them, because they just got cheated by the pills...They just want to see blue instead of red, want fly a hope but not run on stones...The pills cheating, for illusion it brings, control mind, addicting and shrinking everything...We need to let them breaking the scene in the air they breathe to the reality it seems..why... i am afraid the pills tell lie, 'attack that criminal for having me' while the criminal is refer to you...the pills are cheating by illusion of creating.._Unwritten Soul

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Vipins Puthooran 23 October 2011

Great write! and a great poem..... the drugs and cheats are everywhere in this world, spreading their poison like a communicable disease to people, , Eradicate these worms of satan from this world, , But who'll listen, their veins are already in vain, and, Digging theirs grave by themselves. ******************************

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Eric Cockrell 22 October 2011

the greatest scourge on earth... the drugs, and the world they possess!

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