Thursday, September 6, 2012

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Rating: 5.0

Despair is caught in a whiff
Right and wrong hides no meaning
Uncoil your grip from me, dear snake
Gamble your life away with one more try
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Snow Maiden
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Neil Mcgreevy 11 September 2012

Cleverly done, a new aspect on short poems.

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Cherret Leakey 07 September 2012

I like your poem, it's short and precise.

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