I put the cup to my lips
and drank the sweet wine in one go
suddenly, as though all the strengh had gone from me
I fell from my chair and I felt my eye-lids drop
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I admire your poem. No, I think you should keep it. Whatever comes to mind, bring it out in the open for the world to see :) .Oh and by the way...It is a sad poem. Thank you for asking.
Does anyone think I should delite this poem because it is more of a story than a poem! Jamie Parker
Thanks Raquel. You're kind words soften my heart. Jamie