Friday, September 12, 2008

Drug Dealer Comments

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Arabian Heart 16 September 2008

the story of money and smoke choking the way you see yourself taking the way of your heart to save others pain Ian look to your then try to help me understand more

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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 September 2008

Ian! Your feelings are very good. But maintain some structure. Small lines, seperated into stanzazs depending on ending of one feeling/emotion like that.

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