Monday, April 21, 2008

Drowsy In My Desire Comments

Rating: 5.0

Seagulls circling the clear sky.
Naked bodies blanket the beach.
Slickened skin to entrance the eye,
as dreams deliquesce out of reach.
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Linda Marie Van Tassell
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James B. Earley 30 June 2008

A vivid portrayal of freedom in its finest hour....on the beach...broad daylight...reckless abandon! Excellent composition.

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Original Unknown Girl 21 April 2008

Mmm... sounds divine! HG: -) xxx

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Linda Marie Van Tassell

Linda Marie Van Tassell

Lynchburg, Virginia
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