Sunday, January 22, 2017

Drowning Inside(Detail) Comments

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'A silent tear on a pale skin
Flowing down but still not fell
A pinkish fog-blurred by the glass it forms-
Percolates through the shutter
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Akhtar Jawad 03 September 2017

The tears that could not fall on the cheeks were the pearls and have been kept by the eyes. What a lovely poem!

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Chinedu Dike 28 January 2017

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in good poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing. ALYSSA.

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Alyssa Artslover 15 February 2017

Thank you for reading and for your comment!

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 January 2017

Silent tear! ! The pain inside. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Alyssa Artslover 25 January 2017

Thank you for reading it!

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