Friday, December 30, 2011

Drowning In Your Lies Comments

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Are you drowning in your lies,
Falling so deep beyond the skies?
Trying to take back what you done?
It can be pointless to try to run.
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Samantha Rose Turner
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Adeline Foster 12 September 2012

Well written for so young a poet. Off to a good start. Read mine - Bloom of Youth - Adeline

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Saadat Tahir 01 January 2012

wow....passionately put but hard message.... u write very well.. be happy :)

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Binish Cd 31 December 2011

very interesting poem. well penned about a negative aspect of a human being....

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Unwritten Soul 30 December 2011

Another good emotion released Samantha! ! ! wish you can come some brighter poem, talk about happiness..i wonder how it sounds...try write some and sure it will attract many readers! ! ! OK? _Unwritten Soul

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Samantha Rose Turner

Samantha Rose Turner

New Castle, PA
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