Are you drowning in your lies,
Falling so deep beyond the skies?
Trying to take back what you done?
It can be pointless to try to run.
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wow....passionately put but hard message.... u write very well.. be happy :)
very interesting poem. well penned about a negative aspect of a human being....
Another good emotion released Samantha! ! ! wish you can come some brighter poem, talk about happiness..i wonder how it sounds...try write some and sure it will attract many readers! ! ! OK? _Unwritten Soul
Well written for so young a poet. Off to a good start. Read mine - Bloom of Youth - Adeline