Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Drowning In Thirst Comments

Rating: 5.0

My clouds keep getting heavier
Please tell me if they’re clouds
Or just mist floating by
What lies in those clouds
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Mehreen Mujeeb
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Sarwar Chowdhury 15 August 2009

Ammmmmmzing wording! .....fine! 10+

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Sadiqullah Khan 31 March 2009

Just have a good sleep anf feel lighter :) , nice poetry.10

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ata khan 31 March 2009

Simply a beautiful poem

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Mehreen Mujeeb

Mehreen Mujeeb

Lahore, Pakistan
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